Page 2 of 9 for a personal project! A really simple humour/action comic about a heroic but careless girl and an evil robot bent on destroying human kind city by city.
I’m trying to do this since the summer, but I was not satisfied with how it ended up, so I started over, redid the layouts and the pages. It was 13 pages at the beginning, but lots of things where useless, because I had no time do develop the characters more.
So here is the new version. Why not page 1? Because page 2 had a mix of action, special effects and some mid level action (it gets a lot more dynamic and crazy in the following pages) There is no text on the pages for now because I don’t know if it will be in French or English
There are still some mistakes I see and things I’m not really sure of in term of visuals. I’d like to hear what you think, about things I could change or that should stay as they are.
Thanks! and sorry for the long text!
I really like the style of your smoke/dust, it's a change you don't see too often. In the very last panel though, she looks like a lifeless doll due to her legs not being bent, or is that just me? Either way, this is fantastically awesome! I eagerly await p.1,3-9.
Really cool and dynamic. The coloring on this is really cool as well. The head of that obot reminds me of The Iron Giant, but that isn't that big a deal 9just what I thought of). Good work on this so far.
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Well, hi there! And a happy IGLOO! to you.
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parlant de Pierre, j'ai vu le reportage sur l'animation au Vieux sur [link]
Mon film y est et j'en avais aucune idée...
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Mmm. Brains.
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