The Witch and the Prince

Two test pages for my Elementalist webcomic project.
You can find roughs, concepts and other stuff here : [link] [link] [link]

Feel free to comment or critic, you have the right not to like the pages as long as you tell me why

It's been far too long since I have done any kind of sequential art, at work or on my free time. Since I really want to go ahead with my comic projects, I started practicing and I will be doing a lot more of these test pages in the future. My goals are; to improve my storytelling, find the style I'm the most comfortable with and make a choice between my two projects.

Here are some things about the pages, I know most won't read, but I'm writing anyway
I think the style of line doesn't go well with the colors. I should have gone way more sketchy or super clean, not something in-between.
I also could have done more research. Since I haven't picked a project yet, I didn't want to commit to some concepts. Instead, I chose to focus more on style and storytelling than on design (Dreadnaught will be more interesting than just a big grey battleship).